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Tuesday, May 05, 2009

There is a drought in Florida

 
Currently
It's Blitz!
By Yeah Yeah Yeahs
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I wish it would rain

Acid on my bleeding tongue

Standing with my mouth carved open

 

Would you rip it out?

I wonder

Could you, with your eyes closed?

If you were dreaming, sweating in your sleep

 

I prayed…

With your hands

Cool and metal

…that you could

 

For me?

Anything. Of course and naturally

 

Keep it in a jar

For you

Learn the brail of your shedding skin

 

Seeing your moving lips

Like a shattered picture

And If I were awake

I promise

I could read them

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wow. this is truly beautiful.
"seeing your moving lips
like a shattered picture"
my favorite lines out of this :)

its wonderful. truly.
Posted 5/5/2009 8:18 PM by needmoreMANNA - reply

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thank you so much. I wrote it and was very close to not posting it so your praise makes me smile =)
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well im glad i could make you smile :) im glad you posted it
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